CHOOSE EXAMPLES CAREFULLY. Examples are often used to support general statements by giving the statement concrete and specific meaning. Emerson provides a number of familiar examples to illustrate his rather abstract subject, that of "self-reliance." The first example of man's loss of self-reliance is well chosen because all of Emerson's readers would be familiar with a coach, just as you would be with an automobile. This kind of example draws the reader in. Emerson also cites notebooks and libraries as examples of the "crutches" that take the place of memory and learning through direct experience. A well chosen example not only supports a statement; it also makes the statement more meaningful.
ARRANGE EXAMPLES IN AN EFFECTIVE ORDER. In the first four sentences, Emerson contrasts what man has gained with what he's lost, so that point is immediately clear. Though both sides are given, Emerson stresses the negative by placing it last. He gains added emphasis in the first three sentences by using the contrasting word but. By mentioning only the negative in the fifth and sixth sentences, he strengthens his position and makes a solid impression on the reader. Notice also that the order of examples moves from familiar to unfamiliar, simple to complex. The examples are arranged here in order of their importance; if you can convince your reader to accept your minor ideas, the way is paved for the reader to accept the major ones as well.
ASSIGNMENT. Write a paragraph in which you use
examples to support your position in a matter relating to your school or
church. Be sure to select examples that are reasonable and effective. Arrange
them in an order which suits the subject matter.
A few suggestions are provided.
1. The spiritual atmosphere on campus
2. The recent building addition at PMC
3. The amount of work required for Homiletics class
4. Your choice