SUPPORT JUDGMENTS WITH SPECIFIC INFORMATION 
from Life on the Mississippi by Mark Twain from Lord Jim by Joseph Conrad

SUPPORT JUDGMENTS DIRECTLY.  The direct method of supporting judgments or opinions is a natural  in speaking or writing: the judgment comes first.    You might say to someone, "That's a sweet boat."  They might then ask,  "What do you mean by sweet?"  You would then supply the details that define or account for you opinion of the boat. This whole-to-part organization of an idea or image has many advantages for both you and your reader. In order to state a judgment first, you must have thought through your topic beforehand.  Your reader has an immediate overview of the topic--he only has to watch closely as you fill in the supporting details.
UNFOLD YOUR JUDGMENTS.  The direct method of supporting judgments is close to the deductive process of thinking in that the conclusion comes first and is followed by supporting details. By contrast, the unfolding method is similar to the inductive process of thinking, for the details come first and lead to a conclusion.  The Conrad selection illustrates this method--Conrad's judgment comes at the end, preceded by a series of vivid details which are carefully arranged which lead the reader naturally to the conclusion.



ASSIGNMENT.  Assume that someone whom you've never seen before shows up at your church on Sabbath. By observing their appearance and mannerisms, you will form an opinion about them. You notice at the outset that they are dressed somewhat different from others in the church, and you feel somewhat leery of them. Yet, the person has a pleasant face and seems very friendly; a snap judgment doesn't seem warranted.
    In  one paragraph, write a description of the person's appearance and behavior during  church. Make it sufficiently detailed to support your judgment. Place your general statement at the beginning or end--wherever it will be most effective.